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Here's another one of my struggle of "Path to Originality" where I do my best to become original. After the large about of critiques, comments, pencil scribbling, erasing, tablet smashing and arms flailing, this is what I managed. Again critiques are always welcome, gimme ur best criticism.

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:iconstarrygirl123:
starrygirl123 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student General Artist
the second pic looks like me on the way to school! :)
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:iconsuperpony05:
superpony05 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
thats sooooo cute
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:icontearahk:
Tearahk Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is one awesome OC ^_^
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:iconbloodypink-m:
BloodyPink-M Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
awwwwwww so cutie
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:iconteamravers:
TeamRavers Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013
did you make this in paint tool sai?
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:iconbukoya-star:
Bukoya-Star Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
yep
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:iconteamravers:
TeamRavers Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
thats awesome, how do you soften the brushes? the fading colors look so clean and smooth transitioning.
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:iconbukoya-star:
Bukoya-Star Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
lots of markers and such
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:iconteamravers:
TeamRavers Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
is very nice looking. :meow:
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:iconkoopa-master:
Koopa-Master Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Eh. . .Less Lackadaisy, more Pony.
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:iconthetruezealotk:
theTRUEzealotK Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
seems original to me
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:iconmr-geronimo:
Mr-Geronimo Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I like him. Keep him.
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:iconteaminthedarkness:
TeamInTheDarkness Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
Awww ^w^ the adorableness is strong with him, since he is a raccon ( correct me if im wrong please) will he be a super sneake hero?, o a treasure hunter?
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:icondappleswirl:
Dappleswirl Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My new favorite character ❤
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:iconalmostmyself:
AlmostMyself Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Upper right one's pretty cool
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:iconchristopherjb:
ChristopherJB Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
D'aw, he's adorable!
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:iconsorbetberry:
SorbetBerry Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist
Better, I suppose. Yeah, keep tweaking! ^^
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:iconpika-pika-pikahu:
Pika-Pika-Pikahu Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Honestly, it looks too much like your trying to copy :icontracyjb:'s style for me to consider it original.

Sorry if that's mean, it's just, that's how it comes across.
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:iconnerdy-one:
nerdy-one Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
IT'S SO FREAKING ADORABLE.
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:iconstar--sprout:
Star--Sprout Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Awesome work! You're really growing more and more original. I can't wait to see more of him! (Once I get to know him better, I might write a critique :P)
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:iconphoenix4563:
phoenix4563 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
I'd like to critique this [character], but if possible, I'd like to see more of this character first before submitting a critique.
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:iconndbag:
ndbag Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013   Digital Artist
Cute. ^__^
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:iconsuddensketcher:
SuddenSketcher Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well to all those people who reference :iconlackadaisycats:, realize now that perhaps it is his own style and Soapie did not even know about Tracy Butler.
But, if Soapie did, then know also that Tracy did include aids for drawing her cats and humans for others to use. Hell, even I reference that sometimes because eyes and lips kept getting me.
Sometimes, artists look at other artists and say "That's a motherfucking great way to do that." And they use it. Then they customize it.
That's how art perserveres. There are those who begin unique and travel conformed. There are those that conform, and travel unique.
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S-and-K Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
This a thousand times this.
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:iconsuddensketcher:
SuddenSketcher Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
(Sniffs) I didn't think I was so enlightening.
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:icons-and-k:
S-and-K Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
You are, so often people just jump to conclusions they never take into consideration other options.
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:iconsuddensketcher:
SuddenSketcher Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Of course. It is human nature to be hasty, and when I first saw the cats I thought it was an ode to Tracy as well. I admit my faults. But then again, Soapie is a badass artist regardless. Who draws the d'aww with awe.
It's amazing. To be honest, Soapie is up there on my top five list of people I hope to do a collab with one day.
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:iconmotoneko:
MotoNeko Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
first time ive seen this one without a smile XD
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:iconjerrykun:
JerryKun Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
Adawable! :D
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:iconpencil-snap:
Pencil-snap Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that's a fluffable!
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:icongreenrob:
Greenrob Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
neat
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:iconmicronexie:
MicroNexie Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
I love it! It is so cute! But one thing . . . make the tail fury.
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:iconrutana:
Rutana Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Student Writer
Seeing where you come from based on your last picture and how much it resembled lackadaisy, I think you really did improved. It still has many similarities, but it's turning more into a style of your own.
I would try to tweak around at the little details for a bit. The eyes are going in a very good direction, but I think it would look great if you try to fit them a bit more to your "old" eyestyle, that you used on your pokemons or ponies. I always found them to be very distinguished, so I think it would really benefit your style overall and might help to get a better difference to lackadaisy's style as well :)
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:iconnerevars:
nerevars Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This cat really reminds me of Lackadaisycats.com
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:iconmiserybahamut:
miserybahamut Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay, I like this little guy. I don't have really negative critiques, but I LOVE his eyes. They are big, expressive, and the placement on the face makes him instantly likeable. I have this terrible feeling he is rambunctious. I look forward to seeing more!
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Dominoluv Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Student General Artist
I love how you made it different but still cute as lackadaisy, you're going in the right direction ^^ He's so adorable > u < If you are going to make a comic, consider the style of the environement too
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:icondekomaru:
Dekomaru Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Arm flailing is always good exercise. Tablet smashing, not so good...
Nice character anyway :)
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TomboyNinjaXL Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG so cute
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:iconxyless:
Xyless Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
Does he want people to mind the gap? or does he just shop at GAP?
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:iconthemam:
TheMAM Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
That's what I was thinking. :XD:
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