MorningStar - Sneak

The characters themselves are fine, but the way you drew them contrasts with the environment. The characters are more realistic, but the environment looks more cartoonish. In my opinion, you might have made too many cracks in the stone, and there is not enough wear on the house behind them. If you are trying to go for the feel that everything here is old, then add some chips to the wood, or maybe have the roof missing a shingle, or something like that. One last thing is that Mizu's pupil, and colored part of the eye is bigger than the others'. It's a little inconsistent