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April 4, 2013
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MorningStar - Sneak by Bukoya-Star MorningStar - Sneak by Bukoya-Star
The trio consists of Nickel, Mizu and Silvia. They usually hung out together whether it's day or night mostly going through with Nickel's mischief. Though Mizu is somewhat a different species from Nickel and Silvia, they do not seem to mind. They have a tent as their base.
Another of my "Path to Originality" mumbo jumbo, I've been stitching the story together and seems to be going to well, just missing a few points and pints, here and there. Comics about them are on their way.
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The characters themselves are fine, but the way you drew them contrasts with the environment. The characters are more realistic, but the environment looks more cartoonish. In my opinion, you might have made too many cracks in the stone, and there is not enough wear on the house behind them. If you are trying to go for the feel that everything here is old, then add some chips to the wood, or maybe have the roof missing a shingle, or something like that. One last thing is that Mizu's pupil, and colored part of the eye is bigger than the others'. It's a little inconsistent
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starrygirl123 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student General Artist
are they all boys
superpony05 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
walkin on a roof classic
TheGreatHsilgne Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
SorbetBerry Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist
my advice is to just keep drawing them over and over. you may not notice it, but they will gradually change and become more you. then you can compare them and think, "wow, my style really has changed!"
Dappleswirl Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
THEY'RE SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!! X3
AlmostMyself Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Cute! Can't wait for comics
TotalFreakZoid Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good Job Soapie, you're really improving. Keep at it.
Theedarkcorner Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks amazing! I can't wait for the comics :D
Mizu looks the coolest, I think.
phoenix4563 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Alright then. My past comment mentioned I would need to see more of this before I make a critique. But I'm not sure what to critique in particular now, seeing that you have delivered upon more of this original art.
My gut instinct for you: make a comic series with these characters with full blown story/plotline/etc. Give the comic a solid premise. Start it off with plenty of humor to get to know the characters, then slowly drift into the main premise, while keeping a healthy dose of humor to keep the mood light.

I'd read the heck out of that comic, no joke!

(tl:dr version: Once I can safely conclude that you are committed to this/these character(s), I'll submit a critique.)
Bukoya-Star Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
I'll see what I can do then
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